CV tip: How to write a CV that doesn’t sound like a job description
Your CV should not read like a job description.
If you’re a specialist with a clear target role, relevant experience and a well-written CV–but you’re still not getting interviews–this may be why.
Most CVs I see describe what someone was responsible for:
- Managed X
- Coordinated Y
- Supported Z
- Led meetings
- Prepared presentations
There’s nothing inherently wrong with that. But to stand out, you want recruiters and hiring managers to understand:
📌 What difference did you make?
For example:
❌ Managed the preparation of regulatory submission documents.
To move beyond task-based bullet points, here’s one question that can help:
📌 So what?
In other words: Why should anyone care? Why does this matter
**Let’s take our earlier example & follow that thread**
🌱 Managed the preparation of regulatory submission documents.
So what?
🌱 It was a complex simultaneous submission for two major markets: EU & US.
So what?
🌱 Different authorities required different inputs, and the work had to be completed quickly to get ahead of a competitor.
So what?
🌱 The submission was delivered on schedule, approved in both markets, and helped make the treatment available to patients.
⭐️ Now we have the substance for a stronger bullet ⭐️
✅ Led a complex simultaneous regulatory submission for the EU and US markets, coordinating distinct Clinical, Safety and Technical Operations requirements under a time-critical deadline–securing approval in both markets before a competing product launch.
Obviously, only make claims that are true and that you can substantiate in an interview. Otherwise, you could also say:
✅ Led a complex simultaneous regulatory submission for the EU and US markets, coordinating distinct Clinical, Safety and Technical Operations requirements under a time-critical deadline–securing approval in both markets and enabling a timely product launch.

**So, a useful formula is**
📌 What you did + context or complexity + outcome / impact
You may have also noticed that not every achievement needs a percentage or a dramatic “saved X million” conclusion.
⭐️ Impact can be measurable or observable ⭐️
- A process became clearer or faster by X.
- A risk was identified or reduced by Y.
- A difficult project moved forward or delivered in X time rather than Y.
- A stakeholder was persuaded or X patients were reached.
The point is not to make your role sound grander than it was. It’s to make the value you created visible.
**So, take one bullet point from your CV today and ask yourself**
📌 Does this tell the reader what I did–or what changed because I did it?
So what?
⭐️ Specificity is (almost) always your best friend 😊 ! ⭐️
With love,
Dina 🫶🏽
P.S. Next week, I’ll tackle a persistent CV myth: the one-pager.
P.P.S. Once a week I try to focus on helpful CV tips. Anything you’ve always been curious about? Let me know in the comments and I’ll try to cover them next.


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